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Review Detail of LifeGivesYouLemons in Gol D. Ace In Coiling Dragon

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First off I'll say that the grammar of the story is great and the idea was unique. Coiling Dragon was one of the first novels I have read so a fanfic of it is always nice to see. Light spoilers below. There are however a few big issues. In the first few chapters the MC declares to be less impulsive in this life due to his actions having consequences in his previous life. While calm in the beginning within a few chapters the MC throws that all away and becomes a lot more antagonistic than most Chinese MCs to basically everyone with power, which, funnily enough have consequences. I also do not understand the need for the non element during the test and while I'm not sure if that will change or not later, it is unnecessary drama that is more liable to annoy readers then make them want to read further. Considering he was known as "Fire" Fist Ace, many readers probably logically assumed that fire would be his element. Of course the hype before the element test where the MC of course antagonizes someone to then have the curve ball where he has no elements makes it that much worse to accept. Therefore I've had to unfortunately rage quit due to this cliché where there always has to be a problem with an MC in a Chinese novel. Good luck author, I still say that the novel is unique and definitely worth a read.

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There was a reason for him not having an element as he gains an affinity in the not so distant future...