A well written fanfic with good quality Grammer.My problem with this fanfic is that its frustrating to read, The drama in this fanfic makes my head hurt because of all the stupid wuxia cliches there are in this novel.I read fanfic to relax not to feel frustrated and this to me is a frustrating read, Especially the last few chapters have been intorable in the department and I also don't like the decision of him having no element affinity, his literal name was fire fist ace and you didn't even give him fire affinity and to me that's disappointing and I only see that decision making more unnecessary drama in the story. Overall good quality story but I won't recommend it.
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LIKEOh and I forgot to mention how much the author drags this story, Cliffhangers are only good when they are done sparingly and when they make sense not every 2 chapters, that's just makes me not what to read the story.
