Item: Mastering mind magic in Harry Potter
Rating: 4.4
Author: BurgerNight

BurgerNightLv41yr

2023-01-19 04:29

There are only 11 chapters now, so I don't how much weight this review would hold. The grammar is good, and I like the perks he had chosen. The comedy is good, even if there's not much of it. But I definitely recommend this ff

Mastering mind magic in Harry Potter

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