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Review Detail of Cyrs in What If I Can't Die?

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The start is pretty good, we have a good plot and it's clear that the author think in a direction before starting writting but his amateurism becoming pretty obvious when the chapters advance.In my opinion what really mess with this novel was the daily update requirement, if the author have more time for a development this could have been a pretty good novel

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What If I Can't Die?

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