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TanoshimiSubete
TanoshimiSubeteLv41yr
2023-02-02 00:26

I read a bit ahead, & the story seems to go on a tangent whenever it feels like it. Cool concept, wierd execution & read. 2/10

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Dark_warrior
Dark_warriorLv12

read till 190 the story doesnt make any sense no flow to the story like its hard to understand whats happening

Rafian
RafianLv4

it does makes sense just in the most basic sense. so basic that it's stupid

Dark_warrior:read till 190 the story doesnt make any sense no flow to the story like its hard to understand whats happening
Hello_Hi_Goodbye
Hello_Hi_GoodbyeLv1

Yea it just starts feeling like generic cultivation story.

Rafian:it does makes sense just in the most basic sense. so basic that it's stupid
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