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Potato_FaceDragon
Potato_FaceDragonLv32yr
2023-04-13 01:55

I'm enjoying the story a lot, and I feel that it has great potential, the only annoying part is the slightly messy English and grammar and stuff. Overall though I'm really enjoying this and I do understand the overall gist of what's happening even with the not so great English lol, it's good. I find it enjoyable.

System: Supreme NPC

Maketh07
4.3
285 Chs

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Maketh07
Maketh07Author

Thanks for your honest input! Appreciated it a lot. I'm striving to improve the grammar and stuff. If you progress through the chapters, I hope you find improvement. But if not, then I'll work hard and read more books related to grammar. May I know which chapter are you in now?

2yr
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Potato_FaceDragon
Potato_FaceDragonLv3

Currently I'm on ch53, and the English has been improving very subtly over time. Still binge reading so I'll see how it is by ch70 and then I'll have to progress more slowly from there.

Maketh07:Thanks for your honest input! Appreciated it a lot. I'm striving to improve the grammar and stuff. If you progress through the chapters, I hope you find improvement. But if not, then I'll work hard and read more books related to grammar. May I know which chapter are you in now?
2yr
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Maketh07
Maketh07Author

That's good to know. I hope you continue until you finish the first volume. I swear it won't disappoint you. And if you do finish the first volume, hope you can give me constructive criticism so that I get better and learn from my shortcoming. Thank you!

Potato_FaceDragon:Currently I'm on ch53, and the English has been improving very subtly over time. Still binge reading so I'll see how it is by ch70 and then I'll have to progress more slowly from there.
1yr
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Maketh07
Maketh07Author

Author here and my shameless review. I just want to interact with readers, so if you have suggestions and the like, or anything to say, don't hesitate to drop a comment. Criticizing my work is welcome as well xoxo I know, I know it has info dumps in the first 20 chapters but I hope you give it a try.

2yr

TheWorthyOne
TheWorthyOneLv14

I finally found the NPC Lord!!!!!!!!!!!

1yr
Lazy_Pen_Master
Lazy_Pen_MasterLv14

great start to the book . a different style of writing book. there are too many reincarnated in game or game in the reality type novels . but this one stands out like sore thumb. sore thumb is just an analogy, don't take it to heart. overall it's entertaining to read . this review is after i read 25 chapters

2yr
An1k3tk
An1k3tkLv3

liked thr writing style just the info dump sometimes is too much coz i am immersed in current situation and boom 3 paras of backstory. i liked it when author specifically did a background of rook the town chef without interrupting my flow. and also mc us good but he doesn't act like a reincarnated(whatever has happened to him) person sometimes. a solid story. out of 10...it is 8.4 for me

1yr
Despair512
Despair512Lv14

Reveal spoiler

1yr
zxjan08
zxjan08Lv14

Seems interesting! WordCountWordCountWordCount

1yr
Victor_32
Victor_32Lv15

Keep it up! Great book I’m heading to boot camp for a few months but you still have my support can’t wait to read the rest when I get back!!

1yr
grimmhorizon
grimmhorizonLv15

pretty after the first few chapters the mc is In the background and it's all about the adventurers

7mth
Ember_Kurt
Ember_KurtLv11

A good read despite some mistakes. Overall, the story is entertaining, and the plot is intriguing.[img=recommend] However, there is room for improvement in wiring skills.This review is long overdue. Lol. But finally decided to post it now that the author is back. I hope the author will give some of his attention to this book and continue it.[img=update]

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