I'm a person who usually finds a way to avoid giving five stars but I must say this one deserves it. there are grammatical and punctuation errors but very rare and competes negligible I for one am not perfect as a writer either. I make errors and his are not enough to loose a star. as for update stability, i see 5 chapters per week and I won't be taking a star off for that either. personally, i consider 4 chapters a week as the bare minimum some people have jobs and have little time that doesn't mean their books aren't good. they're just busy irl. I got my emotions stirred after the first 1-3 chapters I would normally not bother reading a pirate book or medevial setting book but the characters make me ignore it and actually accept their world. so far I do not see anything to nitpick at. this one isn't just going to my library I added it to my favorites reading list. I will wait til he reaches 40-50 chapters and them binge read it. you got to try it.

i really do love this book 🥺🥺🥺, I had ask myself so many times that why would I love a pirate and medieval setting book cause that's not what I normally read and enjoy but seriously this book really changes everything 🤧🤧.. Somehow, in a way I can't understand, it manage to change my view and concept all over gain, I really don't understand how it did, But seriously I am going to say that this is the most amazing book I have ever read, it's really so amazing and I just want to say God bless the writer so so much for writing such a masterpiece.🥺🥺... I really know some people might not consider this book as a big thing but seriously it is and really wonderful, Totally worth reading too.... Simply just amazing that I had to add it to my library 😅 but I would patiently wait till the chapters are plenty enough to read so that I won't die while reading it, That's it if there are any cliffhangers 😅😅...Lol.. once again just an amazing job 🙂🙂 A complete 5 star

I'm one of those people who don't like giving 5/5 stars because I think everyone can improve on their writing abilities, but the errors I experienced don't take away from the story whatsoever that's why I think it deserves all the stars. It's such a beautifully paced story and I think every detail given is vital to how the events pan out. I saw comments saying they needed explanations immediately, but I completely disagree. Learning about the world created slowly as the story progresses is the way to go and the author does it well. There are so many things to learn about and I don't want it easy or all at once. There's a beautiful balance between dialogue and descriptive paragraphs that really helps with the immersion of the story and I found the chapters to go by really quickly for me. My favorite parts are the accurate descriptions of the harshness and beauty of the ocean. I also found the familial relationships in the story to be so endearing. The feelings their interactions give are so real. I think anyone can relate to them because they show the good and the bad. I can see myself becoming easily attached to the characters. Great job with this one!

Honestly this is a very engaging read. The writing is high quality, the words are well chosen. It is a mix of action, deep feeling and humor, all in one. Makes you want to keep reading. The new words can be a little confusing, but as you read on, you eventually get to understand. It's worth picking up and collecting, everyone!

Impeccable and outstanding. Grammar at its best! I like and loved the descriptions. How wonderful to have read such a gem. Kudos and good luck! Hope you get more features soon 😍

The book is pretty good in its starting. The character development and everything really is just top notch, no doubt about it. I hope it continues on this pace.

Tbh this is my favorite story I've written, so I'm going to be alittle cheap here and give myself 5 stars. I recommend anyone to give it a try and to enjoy the novel. This is a 2 part novel, and part 1 is almost finished. I will be uploading weekly for this book, best I can as well as The Fall of Benma. Hope you decide to join me in this universe I'm creating and enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing.

A hidden gem here on this platform. Splendid descriptions that resonate deep within. Two brothers against the world relying on each other and facing the hardships they chose to go through to protect what matters to them. If you don't read this, then you're missing out on something that you won't find easily. It's true art in its best forms.

Wonderful honestly this is one of the most unique stories I have ever read, the plot itself is what makes it stand out the more the author certainly did a good job here keep it up