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_Dream_God_
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2022-11-27 09:25

Ugh author self review Writing quality: brah I'm not good at writing Story development: I only have 2 chapters so far but I think I'm doing good with showing instead of telling Character design. I feel like I did a good job introducing the first to women. I know the mc is mediocre but the story is more about his confidence. also he's 3 as of chapter 2 Update stability: ok for this one I have to be honest. this might not be great. with my adhd I'm likely to have a lot of chapters in a short time or no chapters for a while. be warned World background: this one is really hard. try not info dumping people when you've come up with a very interesting world. but I will try my best to avoid this one. it's also the reason I didn't chose to make a system novel.

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WISEDRAGON
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I'm gonna start now, Just dont rush with power ups and slow the story pace and all will be fine, Gonna leave a review after ten chapters, Dont be discouraged by comments of people, everyone have their first times, let people criticise , use them to improve , Well wishes 😉

_Dream_God_
_Dream_God_Author

thank you. I hope I'm able to get alot of constructive criticism as I very much enjoy when people point out my flaws. I've always found that as a chance to improve. I hope I'm able to write in a way that presents the world as I see it. so that we can enjoy Kane's story together.

WISEDRAGON:I'm gonna start now, Just dont rush with power ups and slow the story pace and all will be fine, Gonna leave a review after ten chapters, Dont be discouraged by comments of people, everyone have their first times, let people criticise , use them to improve , Well wishes 😉
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