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2023-03-08 18:00

The novel seems to be an intriguing combination of supernatural powers, personal sacrifice, and teamwork. The concept of a cursed jewel that bestows great power but at the cost of attractiveness to women adds an interesting twist to the story. It will be interesting to see how Reece Blay navigates this new reality and how his team will support him in his journey. However, my advice to the author would be to focus on developing the characters and their relationships with each other. Additionally, it may be helpful to explore the motivations behind Reece Blay's decision to forfeit his happiness for the betterment of mankind, as this will add depth and complexity to the story. Finally, the author could consider exploring the themes of sacrifice and the greater good, as these are important concepts that readers can relate to. Good Luck 👍👍

The Curse of the Black Diamond

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Really working hard to make this book a sucesss but I’ll need all the help and support I can get from you all. Please keep reading and I promise you all the best reading experience 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

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Although I don’t read ML genre stories, but this one is just so great, I got kind of interested in ML books after reading this one, thanks to the author for his hard work.... I hope to see the end of the story, so keep up the good work :)

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