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Reading Status: C84 Writing Quality 4/5 Stability of Updates 5/5 Story Development 3/5 Character Design 4/5 World Background 3/5 The total score 3.8 It's honestly an entertaining read to pass the time, not bad, and the overall quality is above the average webnovel sp4m that's everywhere. The quality of the writing is constant, with few or minimal mistakes, but sometimes some phrases can sound a bit repetitive, not in a bad way, but sometimes the descriptions and dialogues are somewhat unnatural for my personal tastes, it lacks some dynamism. I don't have much to comment on stability, historically there have been no pauses, and the author is reliable with what he does, my respects. The development of the story was somewhat strange at first and it was difficult for me to understand it, and even more with lack of information between the progress of the plot and the approach to the characters, or the use of excessive information dumps out of the blue without context; I didn't find a halfway point at the beginning, but then an acceptable pattern was given in how much of the story develops over time. The character design is solid, the author has good knowledge and applies that in a good way, my respects; the characters don't feel 2D, and you can get a feel for what they are like, though sometimes the character categorizations feel a bit forced when trying to "get out of the clichés" and try something new or unique, but otherwise it's above average . The world design was somewhat inconsistent at times, and too explosive in a short time, in my opinion it lacked some light explanations and organization when presenting some backstory features, but hey, overall not unacceptable. In short, it's a story to pass the time, but not to read too often, especially because sometimes with the author's explanations/notes, about psychology, etc., you can do something heavy, and from my point of view, Sometimes it's just too annoying, but I'm not really complaining either, as it's interesting information. The title of the story does honor to what could be inferred: there are descriptions of a good amount of culture. However, as a reader I find it impossible to sympathize with the MC, and while I'm not against darker genres of reading, it can sometimes be hard to understand whether or not there is a good flow of the story to our MC. (Note, the MC is literally someone with no moral boundaries; that's what drew me to reading this in the first place.) For the rest, you are doing a good job author, and you have my congratulations, because many times it is difficult to write about some more complex things and at the same time try to adapt them to the progress of the story. I think your story has potential, but due to my personal tastes I will stop reading it, so peace and good luck in your future work, I wish you the best! .

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