Review Detail of RadicalCluster in

I like the premise and the plot, even though its pretty much nonexistent right now, but what I’m having problem is the the grammar and a lot of “swearing”. Normally I won’t really say anything about swearing in a novel because it’s a perfectly normal thing to do, but doing it at least twice in EVERY single sentences is idk about y’all, is much for me. I would have rated this higher if the author didn’t put 4 “no chapters” to keep their upload schedule which I think is absolutely horrendous, anyways this novel has a pretty good plot, bad execution. Could have been much better imo