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Pizza_Guy_8240
Pizza_Guy_8240Lv131yr
2023-02-12 04:35

Currently, read up chap 134 and I think it deserves a review. Writing quality, I give it a 5/5 Story development 12/10 World background, hmm...8/10 Am not a fan of female lead books, but this book has changed my perspective. I will be talking more about story development. It is currently the main reason why I am still reading and probably what is hooking me in. There is never a dull moment and the villains are so well-plotted. You would hardly see any plot holes. Their thinking, their strategy, their plans, and their movements, not to mention. The twist. It's honestly amazing. I have to say that this book is well-fleshed out. I wanted to give it the rating of 4.5, considering that there are a few things I don't like, e.g There is a villain in this book that should have gotten a more deserving punishment after he was caught, but all was done was to have his arms and legs broken. He is a vampire, so yes, he will heal as fast as possible. It is still bugging me, but I will keep reading. Now, I changed my mind and decided to give it a 5 star. Originally after I changed my mind, I wanted to give it a 4.8, but I thought against it, and This is because of the story's development and plot, as well as the fact that for a fl book, it is amazing. So it's deserving of it I have genuinely enjoyed this book so far and am sure new readers will too.

A Vampire’s Caregiver

AngelLily
4.7
354 Chs

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nkeeavenlymortal
nkeeavenlymortalLv15

What can I say, if not bravo? This an honest review, but I have nothing more to say than bravo. Amazing! Just amazing! I love it! Absolute chef kiss. Perfect and something quite different from the norms you will see frequently here in webnovel. A new plot, fascinating chapters, and most of all, something new and exciting. I mean, aren't new plots, and new designs different from the norms we see, what we are looking for? Oh please, I absolutely recommend it. Try it out and see for yourself. Come back and thank me later.❤️❤️

2yr

LeiaHolmes
LeiaHolmesLv14

This book is actually one of the best books I have read here on webnovel. I just recently came here on webnovel. The ml is so likable. He is so funny without even trying. I love his interaction with the fl. It's just a wonderful book overall. I am in love with the ml😂. Its one of the best book I have read. Read so many in different places, but this book, it's a big yes from me❤️❤️❤️ its comedy too😁will make you laugh a lot, tho feel sad too. I highly recommend to fellow readers.,❤️❤️❤️

1yr
Michelle_Reece
Michelle_ReeceModerator

I am already addicted and can't wait for the story to unfold.I have read other books from AngelLily and I knew this one would be amazing too!And as expected from this author I am totally hooked.I love the ML Valerio he is bossy and funny,the FL Everly is strong and witty Can't wait to see what happens with these two.I am strapped in and got my popcorn ready for an exciting ride!!!!

2yr
DragonRiderOfHell
DragonRiderOfHellLv15

You may have seen me reviewing some other books for this author. And if you are wondering why, there is just one reason. Shes a author who produces quality every single time. So i always will review because she deserves all of the readers in the world. So read this book, it is amazing !

2yr
Mystic_Fantasy73
Mystic_Fantasy73Lv14

Bravo! Impressive! From the synopsis alone to the main chapters I am already invested. Everly, cute and tolerant Valerio, hot, rude but understandable. The grammar on point, characters emotions.. I can feel them! Beautiful !🌷

2yr
Limah_Lisah
Limah_LisahLv12

Another amazing book by AngelLily herself 🤗 The book is one hundred percent amazing and the Synopsis alone is intriguing 🙂 I can't wait to witness the love between Valerio and Everly😃

2yr
Elona_Elen
Elona_ElenLv13

Am not a reader who comments much or even reviews at all, but this book is currently one of the best in my library. There is this allure about it that makes me giggle while I read. Just like a few of the reviews said, the male lead is very likable. One of the best male leads, I have read in a book. Has a cold, yet fun personality. Honestly, it's a five-star from me. I will follow through the entire journey and see the end of this book. dear Author, am honored to have you in my top three favorite authors. A great book you have here❤️

1yr
Bunny_Bunny_3876
Bunny_Bunny_3876Lv15

Definitely a new favorite book for me. I‘m over 20 chapters in and can’t put it down.

1yr
AngelLily
AngelLilyAuthor

Ahem! ^-^ Author here. Dear readers, This my second book that will be going into a contest. This work has as much hard work that was put into sold to an alpha, put into it. Grammar is not perfect, but I believe it’s not bad either. English is not my first language, nor my second, but my third. But am sure the grammar is more than okay. Greatest thanks and appreciation to you guys that will read and follow me on this journey. :) Ahem! If you guys have questions, criticisms, praise or anything you are all confused about, please let me know here or in the. Comment sections. I will be more than happy to discuss it. Big thank youuu.

2yr
Jelome_Sahir
Jelome_SahirLv13

The moment I saw the name, I went like 🤨 A caregiver? Am more of a male lead reader, so this is the first female lead book I have tried out here, why? Because of the name. It attracted me because that's something I have never seen on webnovel. The synopsis was what finally changed my mind and I decided to give it a try. I wanted to read at least one romance book. My biggest point is that I was not at all disappointed. In fact, I am a big fan. The male lead is powerful even though he dosen't have his sight. He is very likable indeed. I must agree with the other fans that the male lead is a very funny man. He is very mean but funny without even trying. The female lead, she is chatty, and sweet and cares for him to a very high level. She's very tolerant as well. Their character development is very natural and I love it. Grammar: Simple and very good. I give author a 10 on that. Am happy to be one of the first fans to read such a new thing on Webnovel. A vampire's caregiver! Hahaha, I love it!

1yr
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