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Review Detail of FrozenWind in A Bet with Slutty Evil Being!

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Honestly, the plot and almost all other elements are good. However, the way the author writes just takes away the pleasure of reading. It is so chaotic that I just stop paying attention to the story. It is like reading two drafts smashed together. If the author can improve this aspect it would be a really good novel.

A Bet with Slutty Evil Being!

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