Review Detail of Fenrirzero9999 in Blood-sin in Kuoh

Autor the begining of your fanfiction was good but I think that you should change him being in rias slave group also we don’t mc backstory or why he like kuroka. I see potential . In my opinion you should refine is background, power, world he came from and romance. Also the mc is quite confusing we don’t know why he did it is power is not explain clearly . Also the majority of people hate slave mc ( dont try to deny that he is a slave) and rias(🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬 plus infinite🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬.