Review Detail of Asel213 in hollywood system: art

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This novel needs an editor. The author, tense up and read your novel. Then you will understand. And start new paragraphs more often. It is not clear where the day ends and where it begins.

hollywood system: art

rollo1019to

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Copy and paste it into a Grammarly document. Editing wil take 10 - 15 minutes at most. 😂

rollo1019to:I'm editing it, but if I edit I don't publish, it's a long job, I know editing is required, but, it's not easy. writing is a hobby, which consumes a lot of time.

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rollo1019toAuthorrollo1019to

I'm editing it, but if I edit I don't publish, it's a long job, I know editing is required, but, it's not easy. writing is a hobby, which consumes a lot of time.

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