Review Detail of Nine11P2 in Harry Potter : Wizard SI

I really love this novel! one of the best characters I have read doesn't feel fake has its flaws,is smart,and annoying too.the grammar is not consistent I say work is needed but it's good for the first novel I have seen worse s**t then thisonly 19 chapters are uploaded by rn so dono about consistency the author uploads daily for now.I really hope author don't drop this an Asian mc other then south east asia or Japan/Korea is rare and I like it!! we need more like this. a little awkward in terms of the country Language references I can see some people don't understand reference in author native language and deem necessary i request author to like not put too much internal reference or jokes as it would look awkward god only I know how much i cringe to read that reference[no hate I am Indian too ;) ].