Review Detail of Boy_Awesome in God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
Review detail
It's a good story to read and the development of the plot is great. The only bad thing is that it's super slow and it's difficult to maintain certain interests unless you like slow burns. Another thing I also want to say is that the mc is really not a villain so I don't get why there's a villain tag. I have yet to see the mc commit something truly atrocious. Perhaps the only thing close to one is his killing the possessed humans but even then there was an excuse and, to be honest, he felt sympathy. I really don't see how this twists into a villain unless he is transforming into one. It's just quite difficult for me to see such contrasting behaviors as he is fine with killing but later there has to be a chapter devoted to his moral dilemma. Very annoying because this has happened in every incident he has killed someone. He literally can't make up his mind on his principles and frankly, it's getting on my nerves.
God of Crime: Strongest Mafia Boss
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đ I will only says one thing. You do know that up to the incident where he killed those human the amount of time is Exactly two weeks? I don't know about you but I refuse to write a character who can go from wishing to become a lawyer to killing hundred of people without felling anything. I may be wrong and I understand why some readers may like a mc who becomes colder faster but I like taking my time for the development of my character . Also I being villain doesn't mean you feel nothing.đ Finally thank for reading and giving a good but fair review. I personally admit that my story can be slow. as you said it's a slow burn. But Adam is slowly changing and I believe his evolution from CH 1 to current chapter be it in terms of power or mentality is clearly noticable.