Review Detail of Hamzat_11 in The Divine God-(Slice of LIfe)

Item: The Divine God-(Slice of LIfe)
Rating: 4.8

Review detail

Hamzat_11Lv121yrHamzat_11

A good novel overall. I believe it would be nice if you watched your use of POV . You classified a part as Ryu POV, but you explained the part as a third party. Hope you improve on that.

The Divine God-(Slice of LIfe)

The_Idiotic_Prince

Liked it!

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The_Idiotic_PrinceAuthorThe_Idiotic_Prince

I will give more focus on that, thanks for the review...

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