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LaoTze
LaoTzeLv141yr
2023-06-17 00:22

Trash novel. Just one example: the MC is at one point the top martial artist in the world, capable of killing other top martial artists with a wave, stepping in to the sky, taking sword strikes to his body without them leaving a mark, killing werewolves with a single punch, destroying entire military squadrons with missiles and helicopters in moments on his own, typical OP cultivation level powers ... then 100 chapters later he's fighting with ordinary security guards while thinking proudly that his body is strong enough to fight 6 regular people. At some point the author completely forgot that the MC has these magical OP powers and now he's just really good at fighting. Embarassing. Another example: at one point, the MC encounters a man who is road raging at him. A crowd gathers as the guy rages and threatens the MC. The MC slams into him, killing him in plain view of the gathered crowd, then causally drives away to go shopping. This incident is never mentioned again past the end of that chapter: in the next chapter we're on to jade gambling with no mention of the prior events. The MC doesn't think about it, the woman with him doesn't say anything or have any reaction, and the cops never investigate the killing. This novel is trash.

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