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Love the writing quality. I fell like this novel, although having a good backstory, I think it has a lot of plot holes. 1. MC entered another body without trying to get any memories of the previous owner. 2. He is a fantasy world without trying to get any knowledge of it. 3. He just got a friend, Taylor, without being paranoid of any backstabbing done due to his previous betrayals. 4. Instantly adding a new friend/ vampire-servant that has the same history as his current body. AND MANY MORE!!! I think the MAIN problem with this novel is due to a lack of proper character development on the MC, the World as well as the side characters. Besides this, it is a really nice one to read, I guess...

Advent Of A Demonic Vampire Lord

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I understand your point and honestly what you said is true... for the first one you mentioned, I'll fix that In a future chapter, something like (mc blacking out and then meeting with the previous owner of his body) So you all will as well know the previous Ryan and also know what his life was like before he died. As for making friends with Taylor, at first, he found him to be weird and all that but he decided to make friends with him, this way, he'll have knowledge about the world he is in. Or better still, he can do that through other means, I'll see to that in the future chapters. And then about Ray, I understand your worries as well. But you know had seen Ryan's true identity and it is kinda risky for him to be left alive when he already knows Ryan's secret. Another thing is that he begged that he does not want to continue being a human. For Ryan, it's like killing two birds with one stone. 😉 I can't go and start rewriting again but I assure you that things like this won't repeat in future chapters. Thank you for your nice review!