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D_Spectre
D_SpectreLv42yr
2023-02-26 19:43

Love the writing quality. I fell like this novel, although having a good backstory, I think it has a lot of plot holes. 1. MC entered another body without trying to get any memories of the previous owner. 2. He is a fantasy world without trying to get any knowledge of it. 3. He just got a friend, Taylor, without being paranoid of any backstabbing done due to his previous betrayals. 4. Instantly adding a new friend/ vampire-servant that has the same history as his current body. AND MANY MORE!!! I think the MAIN problem with this novel is due to a lack of proper character development on the MC, the World as well as the side characters. Besides this, it is a really nice one to read, I guess...

Advent Of A Demonic Vampire Lord

Ruby_banks02
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42 Chs

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Ruby_banks02
Ruby_banks02Author

I understand your point and honestly what you said is true... for the first one you mentioned, I'll fix that In a future chapter, something like (mc blacking out and then meeting with the previous owner of his body) So you all will as well know the previous Ryan and also know what his life was like before he died. As for making friends with Taylor, at first, he found him to be weird and all that but he decided to make friends with him, this way, he'll have knowledge about the world he is in. Or better still, he can do that through other means, I'll see to that in the future chapters. And then about Ray, I understand your worries as well. But you know had seen Ryan's true identity and it is kinda risky for him to be left alive when he already knows Ryan's secret. Another thing is that he begged that he does not want to continue being a human. For Ryan, it's like killing two birds with one stone. 😉 I can't go and start rewriting again but I assure you that things like this won't repeat in future chapters. Thank you for your nice review!

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Author Here!! Slow-paced book... Just be lil patient with me. Chapters will come daily as long as you give your supports... If you've got questions to ask, ask them under my review section.

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KimBarbie
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Seems interesting just judging from the name tho.. I hope the author won't fail me though because I have high expectations for you. from the chaps I've read, the Mc isn't the typical dumb kid I've been reading and I'm happy. the book's plot is okay and the characters are presentable.

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That_Cultivator
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this is a good book to be honest, I read the chapters and they are very well to my understanding. The updating stability is very good and I just hope that the author doesn't drop it. You should read it, I can see the potential in this book. Again, please don't drop this book, author.

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Mia_Silver_4216
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It's a nice book so please don't drop.... I'll love to see more of it.

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Nice book, great concept... Even the characters are likeable especially that Taylor guy... I think he's gonna become my favorite character in the book and so I wish to see more of him

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It's actually interesting and easy to read. the writing isn't bad but needs more improvement. I'm eager to know what becomes of the MC and how he'll become a demon too.

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