The world background is good. Character description was also good. Though the story seemed rushed. I did not get to feel each scene before it jumped to another. Even if the concept sounds cliche, I hope the author makes it unique in more chapters to come. It's still a good piece, keep it up.
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LIKEPrettyfavy64:thanks, I will do according to make you understand, I hope you join me on this journey of writing. Thank you