Man, it would be so good if the dialogue was better. everyone talks the same. they talk and over explains everything, King Cobra says "guys" like he's not a noble for Christ sakes. its painful to read, the characters should talk like they are separate people with different origins and upbringings, not like clones of each other. if it wasn't for that it would be a great for me.
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LIKEMaster4thWall:Thank you for your review, I will keep this in mind when writing dialogues from now on 👍