Item: Hello! Mr Mask
Rating: 2.4
Author: MatildasBT

MatildasBTLv12yr

2022-11-30 02:33

Great name and book cover! It really made me curious about this book. The story was good, but there are many mistakes( verb tenses, expressions, missing words), and the paragraphs are way too large, including long sentences. All of this makes the story hard to read. Well, the narrator's voice also changes frequently, without even changing the POV. That made me confused about who exactly is speaking at the moment. And the villain's only role is to attack the heroine. And the heroine, I get that she doesn't really care about their hate and all, but that only makes the villains harass her even more. Which creates a never-ending cycle. And the only emotion that properly appears( a bit too much btw) is fear. Isn't this a romance novel? Why is the heroine so... strong? Well, I don't say that is bad, but please decide on what type of heroine the book has, and after that, the story will be better. And avoid such repetition of fear and hate. If you mention it a few times is enough. And finally, where is the action taking place? and when? Maybe it is mentioned at some point, or I skipped it, I am not sure.

Hello! Mr Mask

Sophia_Yomere

4.6

169 Chs

Liked by 2 people

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MatildasBTLv1

oh right! the synopsis is great! I forgot to mention it.

2yr

Sophia_YomereAuthor

Thank you for your thoughts on the book, I'll see through all that you've mentioned. Thank you.

2yr

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Mary_SweetLv1

Okay...I haven't been reading on Webnovel for months now but the moment I stepped in, I was graced with a book that I didn't regret reading. I love the characters and the author too and Mr Mask too😍😍 I want to marry him! dear author, do you have him up for sale??

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Kitty_CoutureLv14

Love Jesy🥰, Nigerians are quite talented a lot. Keep up the good work author 🤍.

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Chukwuemeka_101Lv3

I've read just four chapters but I can say that the characters are solid. they're all playing their part in building the general plot. apart from the little but irrelevant grammatical errors, this is a top notch story. I'll love to see how it progresses. Kudos sophia

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AbysalyounglordLv5

The protagonist's journey towards self-discovery, independence, and strength is intriguing, and the sudden marriage to a mysterious CEO adds to the story's complexity. The author has done a good job of creating an air of mystery around the masked CEO, and the dialogue between the two characters is engaging. Good Luck. 👍

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Blessing_OLv14

Love the synopsis🥰 And I think deserves only the best afyer all her years of suffering and enduring her family's tortur and torment. Anyway, only the author can decide what her fate would be, I will jus keep reading. Thanks for an amazing book author🤩

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Lin_Meiling_ReadsLv1

I wholeheartedly give this book a complete five star, the synopsis did a good job of catching my interest, a good write up I must say. The plot of this story is wonderful, I highly recommend it.

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DaoistStDV7ULv12

It's a good book. Definitely needs more improvement just like any other new authors. Good one

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MaryixxxLv4

Another CEO and intriguing story. I haven't read such a well-written synopsis and chapters. The characters and the world background are superb. I will read the rest of the chapters and review them again. Good job, Author. This is one of the best stories for me.

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AnnabaibeauthorLv14

I love the book cover. And of course Mr. Mask himself. The amount of drama that is unfolding is enough to keep be glued to the book chapter by chapter. I am rooting for you. Jiao.

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Sparkles2Lv3

love that fact that the Fl keep giving herself a reason to continue and not give up on life. this story is captivating and mind blowing. I recommend it to readers out there💖

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