souls to the bones,very nice,can you let him keep his musician sidebut make it like he is playing doom music to empower himself and instill fear,also please add uta

One of the best novels I have read. I hope you continue publishing It is true that this does not make sense in the story, but if Brock ate a shadow fruit, it would have been a wonderful thing, or you could create a fruit that does not exist in the story and make Brock eat it, and he was able to eat it because he was a skeleton. I imagined the Sans Sans no Mi fruit from an Undertale can.

it is a good story with a fresh new idea of an insert character, with a nice way to implement in new forms the powers of already in story devil fruits, another set of powers that you could implement for the yomi fruit would be the powers of danny phantom because they are a underworld type of racial abillities that the ghost in that universe all have, ectoplasm attacks, elemental attacks, banshee wails or shout, etc. other types of underworld powers would be instead of ice it could be fire, like in god of war games, helheim is a cold place of the dead but in grece the tartarus is a helish fire place. other type could be necromantic powers, just like original momonga, calling bones from the fallen and using them for spears(bone lance), walls(wall of skelletons), maybe a skelleton hands or ribs to grab an enemy or something, other cool things to add for possible power ups could be the techniques of the rinnegan or the samsara eye, meaning eyes of the reincarnation or such things, those powers are actually even more possible with the combiantion of the yami fruit and his gravity manipulation, having acces to the shinra tensei, maybe revival of other things or persons via inner energy or something external, even a dnd call of the dead, to speak with dead people to get their techniques as well, many possible powers to little space to write

I'm truly enjoying this fanfic so far. the elements you have integrated in the story have kept me reading more and more. keep up the awesome job

Now most people might not agree, Brook is not one of my favourite characters in one piece. But I gave this story a try because I was surprised about the Author other fanfic, staring a different type of Luffy. And at first I didn't think i was going to like, but was pleasantly on how amazing the story was and now I feel the same this story. It has a new and unique different feel, characters are creative and unique I love this feel to a dark character

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It's a very good book and can you please keep on posting and can you do less timeskips.

I like it very much and I hope you update it’s cool and unique.