Review Detail of Kana_Haisha in Fight like a king

TLDR: Solid foundation, but hasn't yet made the most of it. Holy expo-dump. It's competently done, but still in the style of most web-novels - a step-by-step guide to the author's created world. It's overbearing, but, again, not unlike most web-novels. Some writing errors, particularly tenses, cause misinterpretations of the writing to occur. I like the cheeky tone of the narrator. It is uniquely done, and the tone itself isn't overbearing, even if the exposition is. But after the first chapter, the narrator changes, and the tone is no longer present. Some word-choices are odd, and feel out of place. Very solid descriptions, really paints the picture for readers. Honestly, I liked the first chapter better than the 6 that followed, but I think the author has great potential to grow. So, I've used my daily power on them.