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2022-11-29 17:15

A five-star cause it gave me goosebumps and kept me wanting more. A well-thought plot and quite controversial Ml. The Fl is a delight and a breath of fresh air. She is a princess whose knowledge of the battlefield beautifully contrasts her innocence in other fields. My guilty pleasure when it comes to books, is first person pronoun usage. You did it and that was already a huge yes from me. Intriguing story and can't wait to read more of what is to come.

Burning Desire: Bound By Duty

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This work is one of my proudest, and I critique my work harshly. I update almost every day. The story development is great but can do better. The way I created my characters was perfect for me. My favorite character is Damien Cross. I enjoyed writing him and creating his back story. I also love the love-hate relationship he has with Angelique White, his wife. It is a forced marriage and they both loathe each other, but they still try to fulfill their duties. I can't wait to share how their relationship would blossom or meet its end. I hope everyone shares their opinion as well.

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Firstly, when I started reading; I love the intro, the entrance is awesome. Secondly, i love the characters design and tbh, the world development. There are low errors and this actually a thumb up! Well-done!

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