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2023-05-01 06:04

At first this story was an ok story with a lot of grammatical errors and a messed up mc. Then I got to the locked chapters and I read it for free. Tell me why this dude became a bipolar edge lord, whose every action makes me cringe to eternity. He was also acting like a stupid idiot and all of the sudden the author said he had planned everything about the meeting and all that and it’s so forced, like it literally makes no sense. Any way don’t read if you don’t want to feel like your brain dead.

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While I give 5 Stars, for me personaly there are not enough chapters releasing.🤣 Well can't say anything though being an author is hard. As of when I am writing this review I finished reading chapter 146. So as some might already see I really like this novel, but will give my best not to be biased. Pros: --> Class Whe need to absolutely talk about the class. Dungeon Master is just such an amazing class in this novel that this class alone without any other player and only him and his class is enough to write a great novel. From inner working, in the dungeon to how he needs knowledge, Evolution, usw. is just amazing and since I don't want to spoiler too much read it yourself. --> time mc is reborn one year after the game launch so all others are a year head of him. This gives him huge disadvantages, but it also Shows us how he wants to catch up and another Perspektive to the usual Storyline in an mmorpg novel. --> evil mc I wouldn't directly say he is evil but many propably would give him in this category. Anyway I like his Personality and if you are not 100% in moralitys shakles bis personality shouldn't be a Problem for you since of right now, you can only really speak of one really evil moment, and we must say that he is a Gangster more or less at the Moment. --> relationships his relationships are fairly unique as of now with his Brother and assistant. This spices things up quite nicely. -->character growth To be true many decisions of mc at the beginning are questionable, his personality at some points unlikeable but all this has a turningpoint very early on when he realises those things himself. So we have a character with a growing personality which is always a nice trait to have. Besides what is also very important side characters also have this growth👍 really great Job author. -->flexibility even though he is a reincarnator, not everything works out fine for him. But he can adapt to the Situation quite well. -->Smooth story Everything feels extremely Smoothe even though not everything works fine for the mc. I just can't comprehend how the author made it so nicely balanced. -->side characters the hated children of authors, but whe don't have that here. Every sidecharacter from his brother, assistant, dungeon assistant, or even the fat City Leader of his first City have their own personalitys, Motives, Background usw. Overall they are great and we even have here and there 1 or 2 chapters of what is going on with only sidecharacters involved. Which is just the right amount. -->snakes this is a completely personal opinion but I love snakes and poison, but authors don't really think they are worth it to Become one of the main themes of the novel. So I am really glad to have them here. Many thanks author. So to the cons.... to be serious I don't really have any but since there should be ones I will pick out what I can but they are either minor ones or don't represent my own opinion. -->early buttlerfly The buttergly effect is a little too early into the story and a little random for me but it is only a few chapters since then and I am surfe author will let is know in a future chapter why it happend. -->evil mc while not a Problem for me a lot of people just can't or might not like a mc who is not completely innocent. So while theoretically is a pro lets also put it in cons -->slow leveling and building is relativ slow, but I like it slow in this novel and even hope it to be even slower. But there are people who can't appreciate it propably so lets also put it into cons. -->early personality mc mcs early personality is a little trash, while it is Part of the development of the mc there will propably be people who will stop reading it because of it while Passing on a gem. So this is a personal Con because of Pity for all the people who drop it too early. Ok this concludes my review. Overall I heavily recommend this Novel, and I am Sure you won't regret reading it. But make your own opinion of it. ***Note to Author*** If you every read this, Thank you for such a great work, I always wanted to be an Author myself but my grammar just sucks too much. So I have a little bit of an idea how hard it is to write a book in generall, and I can only imagine how hard it is to write such a good one. I feel a little Pity to only find this book so late, so I was unable to join the Journey of this story from the Start but I am happy to be Part of it now. Please keep up the fantastic work and don't drop the novel. I am sure all people who like the novel (me included) can understand if you need a break and it is okay to not Stress yourself over Updates. New chapters are nice but quality is better than quantity and while we all hope for more chapters, this is purely because we like the novel so much and it is not that we want to pressure you. with kind regards Sinone

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