Item: Alantina Online: The Greatest Sword Mage Reborn As A Weak NPC
Rating: 4.6
Author: Pancho_Uy

Pancho_UyLv142yr

2022-12-22 10:46

Really an enjoyable reading. ML and FL are relatable, dialogues flow naturally, the story is developing in a logic way. Good pace, some action with purpose, MC building strength without weird out of the blue deus ex machina. The world background isn't that much developed same with the system, but te story is just starting. If I were to criticize something, it would be the headache scene. I've seen that somewhere else. The MC talking to himself out loud to trigger it was a bit unnecessary but I hope it will be well managed in the end. Either way I don't dislike that path. So far so good 👍 Keep going, author sama! I believe in you!

Alantina Online: The Greatest Sword Mage Reborn As A Weak NPC

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