It is a somewhat nice novel and the concept has an amazing potential if devloped correctly but, the writing make it a bit unpleasant to read. I recommend the author to learn grammar and please use the appropriate time for each sentance.
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LIKEHile_Lawrence:Thank you for your critics and suggestion. English is not my first language. I will try to improve it as soon as possible.