This has been the most fantastic book I've read. Tough female lead, me likeee.💯 But there are some things author needs to work on. The tenses! Since they were in first person narrative, there should be balance in it because there was a point the author used the wrong tenses in the narrative. Not only that, she used that in the third person narrative too. *World building. Though I'm not good at it too, you can learn and become better than I am. You should talk about how the bar looked like, how he felt when he was working there. How the scene from the sky was when Samantha grabbed his waist and smiled. And some spellings need to be corrected too. I know you're not a native English speaker, but you could edit this with yhe help of apps like grammarly. So far, I'm enjoying this book while ignoring the mistakes. Its gonna be a big book that'd make it. I recommend this.😊

Quite an interesting read. As a fan of the vampire lore, I am enjoying it. The opening chapter reminds me of 'Tokyo Ghoul' in some ways. Hope the MC will show gradual emotional and mental development over the course of the novel. Keep up the good work, author. This looks like quite an intriguing read, full of mysteries and surprises.

Interesting book and well written. Character's thoughts are shown clearly and very expressively. Good read if you are into vampire books! Good work

Interesting, based on the first chapter alone I can tell that its going to be an interesting story. Though, I don't usually like reading vampire book (I am more into dragons and stuff) but this one, I will make an exception. :D

I was very interested in your title from the beginning, it sounded very interesting. And my guess is right, when I read it, it's really fun and I can't stop reading. I think this is a really good book!😃💙

This book is outstanding The grammar is polished and the character development is at a very outstanding pace. I must say, the author took the time to put out a great one. Samantha is a handful making this book have great potential.

Wow I really love this book but seeing the title of the book make me understand that there is going to a bad ending or happy ending but also am not a fan of bad ending book but am sure it will end with a big glamorous lifestyle....

A novel with emotions twirling in me while I read. It was a decent novel and was good at that. Also, the grammar and narration were above average. Making me have a good first impression and a good reading experience. Having a hooking plot was also one of its strengths. Good job! Improve more and the best is yet to come! 😎

Thumbs up for the great story, that you have created. I think I have to learn from you. The story was detailed, new and fresh. Even Characters setting was good. More ink to your pen. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. Good Luck!