Review Detail of Fearmongering in The Laments of a Guilty Soul Eater

This is a review from a fellow author, so basic legibility and normal grammar are not the basis for an instant 5-star review. Let us start with the writing style. The writing style is a perfect fit for the story itself and mirrors its protagonist in his views of the world. At times one could refine and enhance some sentences a bit to further enhance the experience. Stability of updates: No comment, since I am not a big fan of daily posting anyhow. Story development: The story developed has much potential and speaks of a world just like ours. Although the foreshadowing was obvious enough for a visually impaired person to see through it. Overall, nothing too groundbreaking, but not something hard to imagine. Character design: Is the biggest strength of this novel, as every character, even the stupid ones, do have their own agendas and motivations─mind you─ it still reads a bit "young", so some refinement could further enhance these characters, but that was not enough of a downside for me to lower it from 5 stars. The world background is, in my eyes, the weakest link. That is not to say that Planet Earth is not represented well, I just think that it does come a little too short in these 34 chapters. While Kai's view of the world is important, the world background should never be too much in the background