shamelessly reviewing my own novel lol It may not have the whole plot laid out in the title, but maybe that's partially because the MC dunno what do be going on either! Anyways, although I cannot speak for the writing quality myself, and there are like 8 chapters that i am very very slowly revising because imo they make no sense, the excitement I am feeling as the first volume comes to a close is... spectacular. I sure hope that I'm doing my words justice by sharing this sense of excitement with you all. After all, why would we read books if not to connect with others and understand the human experience? Hopefully my tired words can bring these things to you as well. And on that note, I've got a chapter to write!!

Sup teddy really good book I see hope you achieve a prize also nice book. This book has an easy flow down to earth with the rhythm being good and it a roller-coaster ride

This book only has one chapter at the time that im reading it. However I do think that this book has a lot of potential and it's a unique storyline from what I can tell. I'm looking forward to new chapters!

I enjoy this book. I have read the title front to back, and it is very unique and thrilling. I may even read the book itself someday. I only wish that this novel was updated more frequently so i could more frequently consider finally reading it.

I really like it, hope you continue like that

The author has piqued my interest from the very beginning. The mysteries are many and I am not quite sure how it will all work (which is a positive considering I can usually predict the plot), so I look forward to seeing how it will all unfold. I don’t want to spoiler tag, but I will say that the confusion the reader feels at the beginning is intentional and it will make sense as the story progresses. The story drops in unexpected humor at just the right time to keep the story from becoming too dark. Overall I can see this being an interesting tale with twists and turns along the way. Please give it a try!

I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. The imagery and thought nuggets are rich, and I look forward to reading more!

Welcome fellow readers to another Ash review! (This one will be shorter, though, I will make another review later after reading all the chaps.) At the time I'm making this review, I've only read 12 chaps. Ok first is the writing quality. And to put it simply... it's better than the majority of other novels on this app, and you can see that the Author has a lot of potential. Writing quality is good, so don't worry about that. Next, is Story development, which from what I've read is progressing nicely and steadily. The Character designs are well thought out and the MC, Kai is cold and unfeeling. The side characters are well made and bring refreshing moments of humour in an otherwise quite dark and bleak mood. I can't comment on World Background since I haven't read all the chaps, but from what I've seen, looks good so far. All in all, I would tell you to give this novel a shot. You never know, it might just be what you've been looking for. P.s. Good lucky Teddy! You've got this. :)

I read the first volume of this novel about a month ago and I really enjoyed it. It starts out a bit clunky and confusing, (although the reason why is explained later in the story), but it picks up the pace quite quickly once the main character gets used to his situation and starts learning about his powers ( and us with him). The tone of the novel is generally a heavy one, with occasional moments of humor which help giving the reader space to breath (although some jokes or references might get past some of the "older" readers). The characters feel solid, they act like normal teenagers would and it is intriguing to read how their normal behaviour and emotions are effected by the mc's actions, which really adds to an already pretty interesting ( and personally unpredictable) plot. All in all I recommend the novel to anyone that doesn't want to read the usual progfantasy/powerfantasy and wants a change of pace, it will be worth your time.

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