Review Detail of Gortox in Brought to a Xianxia World with My Friend's System
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Sorry if it sounds like I'm bashing you, but the plot as well as characters just keep on going it a direction that makes me want to throw my phone on a wall. Please keep in mind that all I said is personal opinion and there could be people who instead like this sort of characters and plot, but *I* find it disgusting.
Mistah_Meowmerz:Thank you for your review! I'm sorry that you were so disgusted... =w=
No worries. =w= Did you have any specific examples in mind of when the plot or characters disgusted you? I would love to take your feedback into consideration!
Gortox:Sorry if it sounds like I'm bashing you, but the plot as well as characters just keep on going it a direction that makes me want to throw my phone on a wall. Please keep in mind that all I said is personal opinion and there could be people who instead like this sort of characters and plot, but *I* find it disgusting.
MC and that girl are the main ones thought I only read until chapter time traveler. As for plot, it's the whole shtick, OP person who doesn't even understand it, who is as described by another character 'too carefree'(forgot which word was used). The 2 'systems' whole thing, how forced the plot feels and finally the whole point about those 2 guys that 'like' her. I'm about to go to sleep so I can't do better explanation.
Mistah_Meowmerz:No worries. =w= Did you have any specific examples in mind of when the plot or characters disgusted you? I would love to take your feedback into consideration!
Fair enough. I like the characters as they are, at the moment, but I'll probably go back at some point to see if the plot feels forced, and what can be done to fix if necessary. As for the system, it's kind of an integral part of the plot, so I don't think I will be able to change that, at this point. Thank you for your feedback. =w=
Gortox:MC and that girl are the main ones thought I only read until chapter time traveler. As for plot, it's the whole shtick, OP person who doesn't even understand it, who is as described by another character 'too carefree'(forgot which word was used). The 2 'systems' whole thing, how forced the plot feels and finally the whole point about those 2 guys that 'like' her. I'm about to go to sleep so I can't do better explanation.