Going through the reviews section of this book to decide on reading it or not 😏 I hope this would be of a help: One little flaw I found, at the initial chapters, is the constant use of the alphabet A in naming the characters to the extent that remembering the knight's name, Aramis's father, is a little bit difficult even at this moment 😶 But maybe, just maybe, it is only me who finds it as a flaw 😐 I enjoyed the switch of time between Aurnia's past and her present without affecting the story's flow 👍🏽 But I hated one thing, how Aurnia had been crying coz it is really heart breaking to me 😄 Author, why must she suffer a lot 🙃 If you are a person with heart diseases, then you should maybe not read the first chapters 😅 It is just a personal advice 😄 Reading it made my stone heart emotional 🤭 Something nice 🤝 Characters' actions are given more consideration over theories, but I like it 😌 Although reading actions of characters makes a HD vision in the memory, theories should also be given a home, Missy Castillo. Five sense organs stimulation is as well good. I'm not sure of the author wanting a spoiler revelation, so nothing will be said pertaining the story. Galatea: The Last Whisperer has said it all if you have read it. The journey will be worth it for sure, I am sure. Give it a try. May the story not be dropped.

Your story is quite interesting. And the settings, words, character building was great. I think I should learn from you. If you continue to write it. I am sure you will get a contract soon.

I'm not really one to read romance novels but this one has me hooked. If I had more time on my hands, I would have probably been at the latest chapter cos I'm a fast reader. The emotions this book makes me feel are so real and aren't artificial or a try hard. Good work✌👍

The cover is beautiful, the synopsis is really catchy. The author has a way with words because the writing style is really nice and the story has an amazing plot. Great job author

The author's writing style is great. She has a way with words. The story could have been really great if she'd allowed it to flow. From chapter one, we got to know the FL's sorrow. However, the story suddenly jumped from present to past in chapter two without warning, making me confused and thinking if there was another character with the same name. It flowed until chapter four where it returned to the present. I was alarmed to realize all I was reading was actually a flashback. Then chapter five, there was a flashback again, taking us back to where the previous one stopped. Sigh... I'd say, start the story from when they were little, however, there's no suspense. So it would be great if you combine all the flashbacks and just make us be done with it once and for all and start reading the main thing or just break them into pieces and scatter them in the story as it progresses. For example, something important happened and she suddenly got a feeling of Deja Vu. With that, you can push in a flashback. Also, another thing I found a bit unpleasant is the incessant use of pronouns. Using their names would make the readers get used to them, after all, the names are kinda foreign and hard to remember. Then we have the descriptions. You did a splendid job there. I have nothing to point out, however, it was a bit too much. It took the place of dialogue. Dialogues should be about 60–70%. Aside from that, regarding the character development, world-building, Writing quality, and update stability, I gave them five stars.

Okay. You guys need to try this out! Tthis story is amazing, it's like I was a watching a movie. I wonder where Amaris is though. I need to see him and punch him on his face. How could he treat Aurnia that way!?💔😭