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Aureusz
AureuszLv102yr
2023-03-21 19:30

Alright! I made this account to just post my personal view and opinion so you might have different thoughts from mine and that's fine! So try reading it first! Review: Ever since Ezio was kidnapped and we no longer see most of the thing's on his perspective.... Everything went bland. Most probably because after Ezio disappeared, the "MC" took over and we are now watching things on his POV. I don't have problems with Overlords or Demon King's MC, Cold MC's or anything of the same type... but wow he is so empty, bland. Ezio, his character was developed and he atleast felt "human", feeling angry when they attacked his Uncle, feeling sadness from the death of his Uncle which was his only family, and feeling fear when encountering (whatever his name was). He felt developed and he had a story we "saw" but in contrast to (whatever his name was) the "MC" he feels empty, bland, annoying, and that's all there is to him. Of course, he has this whole backstory of just being treated like a monster even though he was human and that he was qoute on qoute "framed", and that he wants to live a normal life. Yet, what he does is quicken the problem that are gonna happen and that affects his normal life too, he doesn't put effort into acting like a human and referring others as "humans" like he himself is not, he didn't even try to save his "toy" Ezio and let him be kidnapped. He always complains and complains it's annoying to read. In short, MC is a human who lost his humanity, an empty character, and an annoying one. At least the writing quality is fine and the chapters are free.

Your Not So Ordinary Villain

bluerabyss
4.3
410 Chs

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Aureusz
AureuszLv10

Btw, as you've already guessed, I'm just at the starting part of the story but I just wanted to address how it's difficult to continue reading but I'll try to do my best to painfully continue watching this weird psycho and his story. I haven't seen the most of the (who knows what his name was) but I do hope its not a generic one and is fitting for his weirdness. Anyways, author keep it up, the review is only about the beginning anyway

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bluerabyss
bluerabyssAuthor

Hi! I appreciate the review and thank you for being honest. I do hope you continue reading though. I'm glad you hated my MC 😁😁😁.

Aureusz:Btw, as you've already guessed, I'm just at the starting part of the story but I just wanted to address how it's difficult to continue reading but I'll try to do my best to painfully continue watching this weird psycho and his story. I haven't seen the most of the (who knows what his name was) but I do hope its not a generic one and is fitting for his weirdness. Anyways, author keep it up, the review is only about the beginning anyway
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Hi this is your Author, giving myself a five star review 😁😁. To my dear readers, please continue to support my novel through Powerstones and a review of this novel will be greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance and happy reading!

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CELEBRATING A MILESTONE! Thank you so much for your support! 🍷 Your Not So Ordinary Villain (YNSOV) Has reached...100k words, 100k views, 100 Chapters within 65 days of writing. By far this is the fastest I've ever written a novel, the fastest the views growth and the fastest I've reached a hundred chapters. Breaking limits and pushing through, a challenge for myself and a challenge to all the writers out there. You might not be famous or you feel like there's no one reading your novels, but you still need to push through. You are both a writer and a warrior waging war in a battlefield and your goal is to finish and to be victorious! Enjoy the journey and savor every moment.

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So much nonsense. The MC is not the MC. It’s all about that kid and the uncle, and the kid is so annoying. I thought this was dark villain type novel but it’s really not. The ”MC” is more of a hero type. It is too bad because there is supposedly no romance in this novel but I have to drop it.

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Hehehe Why do I feel overlord vibes? Well decent read and writing quality! I am impressed with the novel...pacing is perfect 👌 Write more and this will be binge read by your readers...yours truly

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Dear Author, your novel has some great potential but the thing is, its too inconsistent. The attitude of your MC portrays so differently depending on the situation. Its very disappointing, and annoying at that to see something who's gone to worlds just to find a satisfying enemy and then display such weak powers like that in the novel. If it were based on what the story had gone through the MC could have erased the tower in just one snap, his killing intent would've overwhelmed the enemy, not to mention the move he would be doing would probably be like training the kid for him to defeat the MC one day or something. Just please find a characteristic for the MC and stick with it.

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After reading 200+ chaps and i think it's time for me to write a review. Personally, this is the best villain story that i have read on this platform. I absolutely love our psycho mc and all other characters. I love how op the mc is and how he usually just sit back and watch everything goes like how he wanted it to be. The story is not all action and we can see the story and some drama. The only bad thing that i can say is there's some typo here and there, where some words is easy to understand and some just incomprehensible lol. But overall this story is a very good read and on the top of my list. Amazing job author, keep it up! 🔥

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Ganda ng novel mo broo! 5/5...... Good plot, good pacing, interesting characters......Sana maging sikat tong novel nato. Hahahaha, best of luck.💖💖💖💖💖😄😃😀

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