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Blooddoctor
BlooddoctorLv132yr
2022-12-07 20:28

I will start from the title. The title is really intriguing, and the synopsis helped a bit. I can say that the author's writing style is average because there are some words that came out rather cringe. Especially the dialogues. I love the depiction, especially the way the author explains the use of magic, it would be better if the author butress some fight scenes more in order to give us that thrilling feeling. The MC seems to be one cool but at the same time hard man. He gives me that drunken master feeling hehehe. I can't talk about the world background yet but I like the fact that there was not too much info dumping. Lest I forget, some paragraphs are long and thereby bored me to the extent that I had to skip some. This is a good book and it would be better if the author improves. Keep writing!

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Hi! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about my novel and I'll keep your observation in mind for my future chapters, and for the future editing that I'll be doing! 😁😁😁

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