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Blooddoctor
BlooddoctorLv132yr
2022-12-07 20:28

I will start from the title. The title is really intriguing, and the synopsis helped a bit. I can say that the author's writing style is average because there are some words that came out rather cringe. Especially the dialogues. I love the depiction, especially the way the author explains the use of magic, it would be better if the author butress some fight scenes more in order to give us that thrilling feeling. The MC seems to be one cool but at the same time hard man. He gives me that drunken master feeling hehehe. I can't talk about the world background yet but I like the fact that there was not too much info dumping. Lest I forget, some paragraphs are long and thereby bored me to the extent that I had to skip some. This is a good book and it would be better if the author improves. Keep writing!

Your Not So Ordinary Villain

bluerabyss
4.3
410 Chs

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bluerabyss
bluerabyssAuthor

Hi! Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts about my novel and I'll keep your observation in mind for my future chapters, and for the future editing that I'll be doing! 😁😁😁

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Hi this is your Author, giving myself a five star review 😁😁. To my dear readers, please continue to support my novel through Powerstones and a review of this novel will be greatly appreciated. Thank you in advance and happy reading!

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CELEBRATING A MILESTONE! Thank you so much for your support! 🍷 Your Not So Ordinary Villain (YNSOV) Has reached...100k words, 100k views, 100 Chapters within 65 days of writing. By far this is the fastest I've ever written a novel, the fastest the views growth and the fastest I've reached a hundred chapters. Breaking limits and pushing through, a challenge for myself and a challenge to all the writers out there. You might not be famous or you feel like there's no one reading your novels, but you still need to push through. You are both a writer and a warrior waging war in a battlefield and your goal is to finish and to be victorious! Enjoy the journey and savor every moment.

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KIING
KIINGLv14

So much nonsense. The MC is not the MC. It’s all about that kid and the uncle, and the kid is so annoying. I thought this was dark villain type novel but it’s really not. The ”MC” is more of a hero type. It is too bad because there is supposedly no romance in this novel but I have to drop it.

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Grandmasters
GrandmastersLv3

Hehehe Why do I feel overlord vibes? Well decent read and writing quality! I am impressed with the novel...pacing is perfect 👌 Write more and this will be binge read by your readers...yours truly

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RadBrad73
RadBrad73Lv14

Just not a good villain type story and it’s not at all what the tags and description portrays.

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Higgs
HiggsLv4

Dear Author, your novel has some great potential but the thing is, its too inconsistent. The attitude of your MC portrays so differently depending on the situation. Its very disappointing, and annoying at that to see something who's gone to worlds just to find a satisfying enemy and then display such weak powers like that in the novel. If it were based on what the story had gone through the MC could have erased the tower in just one snap, his killing intent would've overwhelmed the enemy, not to mention the move he would be doing would probably be like training the kid for him to defeat the MC one day or something. Just please find a characteristic for the MC and stick with it.

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ItsyBitsyLunatic
ItsyBitsyLunaticLv11

After reading 200+ chaps and i think it's time for me to write a review. Personally, this is the best villain story that i have read on this platform. I absolutely love our psycho mc and all other characters. I love how op the mc is and how he usually just sit back and watch everything goes like how he wanted it to be. The story is not all action and we can see the story and some drama. The only bad thing that i can say is there's some typo here and there, where some words is easy to understand and some just incomprehensible lol. But overall this story is a very good read and on the top of my list. Amazing job author, keep it up! 🔥

1yr
KaitlynLenke
KaitlynLenkeLv14

I absolutely love this novel, the mc is chaotic and I love his personality. The story is also really fun to follow and I never end up becoming bored whole reading!

1yr
ADOLF_KITLER
ADOLF_KITLERLv4

Top tier novel can't wait to read more u should make a discord server for the novels u have made. great place to clear doubts about the novel

2yr
Kim_Dokja_5149
Kim_Dokja_5149Lv3

Ganda ng novel mo broo! 5/5...... Good plot, good pacing, interesting characters......Sana maging sikat tong novel nato. Hahahaha, best of luck.💖💖💖💖💖😄😃😀

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