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2022-12-02 19:05

A classic romance between rivals. Both protagonists are opinionated, smart, and stubborn. There are sweet enduring touches as well as bitter interactions as expected. The only issue I have with the story is the way the dialogue is set up (but I believe that may just be the author's style of writing). The synopsis uses quotation marks ("...."), but the story uses apostrophes ('....'). Overall, I look forward to future updates!

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Thanks for the feedback. Now even I notice it might've looked odd. Thanks for reading my novel though. Hope you continue reading it. 😊

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