Writing quality :- the grammer is good , the author seems to be serious when writing , seeing the attention in the writing . But there are too many unnecessary descriptions like when we meet someone there looks and clothes are described in unnecessary detail . Which leads to a slower pace . Update stability :- the author seems determined to not drop the novel and the novel has good update stability . I hope it is not dropped . Story developmentent :- it was unnecessarily slow at the start . But the story seems to have picked a little pace but its still a little slow . Overall , i think it is a great story whose updates i look forward to , i hope it picks up a little pace . It encompassed the cruelty of GOT world perfectly and gives us characters that seems to have compassion which makes it easy to root for them , which is rare in most stories now a days .
Rhagnar2018
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LIKEThank you dear reviewer. I appreciate both your criticism as well your joy of reading my work. The pace will slow down a little more again because I'm introducing characters and I certainly don't want to ruin that right now because if a character introduction gets fudged then you know you won't enjoy the novel in the future. keep reading after chapter 38 story picks up great.
Rhagnar2018:Thank you dear reviewer. I appreciate both your criticism as well your joy of reading my work. The pace will slow down a little more again because I'm introducing characters and I certainly don't want to ruin that right now because if a character introduction gets fudged then you know you won't enjoy the novel in the future. keep reading after chapter 38 story picks up great.
s_b8099:Thank you for reply .. i will be looking forward to more chapters.