Review Detail of SERBMADHAUS in HOTD- Rise of the Fire Emperor

Although this story possesses the potential to become quite good it seems that the exposition and build up of both the character and the world is taking fat too long.....'all bones no meat' would be a good expression. It is evident that the author is improving towards later chapters however this rate is far too slow. Hence my 3.8 review score. If the story develops In a more enticing and entertaining direction I will surely change my review score to something far higher.