Review Detail of FlammableFire in Leveling Up with My Adorable Monster Girl Harem!

Yeah, sorry author, but this is just way too hard to read. --- It's not the grammar or spelling, but something else about how you write. It's like everything is stunted and lacking detail while presuming that the reader perfectly understands everything that's in your head while writing. --- We don't. --- Chinese MTL is easier to comprehend than this. I wish I could give you an exact reason why, because this story is a cool idea, but I can't.