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PEARL_WANG
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2023-05-17 23:42

I don't what you have edited and not... but I see there is no more requirements to rewrite the first seven chapters. It simply keeps people hooked and have suspense, thing I liked the most is that the gaming dump wasn't included in first few chapters. Like it's annoying but your story is vivid and full of emotions. I have a lot to learn...keep up!

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Wow! Thanks. Coming from you, it means a lot. I'm glad you liked the rewrite.

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