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2023-02-01 21:17

I give this book a 4.6/5 rating as there was some mistakes in the first few chapters of the book. The plot is good and the way that the author describes the world building is mind blowing. However, I did not get the chance to see a much slower progress or a relevant description of some of the characters. For example, "He bumped into a young man, age 18, much smaller than him." I was taken aback by how the MC would know that the man he bumped into was age 18? He could've jus describe the young man's relevance to the story or describe the young man himself. However, please don't be too offended to this review and take it as a grain of salt. The author is great in other areas of the novel and I could see good potential with this. ^_^

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PrinceClover
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The young man I describe was actually the MC hahahahaha I'm only using extra's pov to describe the disaster brought to them, but a furtitous encounter to the MC. XD

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