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2023-02-11 14:16

Good potential novel wasted by fm lead and meaning less recarnation

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Honestly, I won't blame your opinion of any of the characters. But I don't think the reincarnation was meaningless at all though~

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Author review here, and a shameless one I'd say. And for starters, I've rewritten this story here, hence for those who have already read everything... you might want to go back (There's new chapters).... A new year, a new beginning I'd say. Happy New Year (2023) to everyone here~ Now for a proper greeting, Hi everyone, hope you're well. And Small add up to the novel. And please check out my other novel "Established Pinnacle: The Enigma", if you have time. It is a bit rusty and quite far from being a great novel, but that is because it was written by the immature me during high school. But I did spend months making it at least descent to read and enjoy. And they are the same book world, but this world is at the far future, and a different Verse compared to EPTE. And unlike ETPE that focuses on multiple Verses and multiple stories as well as Gods, this one focuses on a single world and the story of Damien Gray. Anyway, this is not important for now. This novel has the tags "dark" and "antihero", so please be prepared for something gruesome and a ruthless main character. He is not a villain, just not a hero either. And the book takes place at an environment where it is kill or be killed, a place where slaughter is a common fest. A place where races are bias towards other races (not racist). Take that in mind before judging the character's actions. It also has the tags of "system" and "overpowered", but... yes there is a but. The Mc is strong, but that does not mean he is innately at the peak of Existence. There are strong beings, gods, outer beings, primordials, ancient beings, dimensional beings, and many other that are strong, yet might not get much screen time. And the system tag, applies to the whole world. It is not something the main character has by himself, but something like a game system owned by all players. And the novel has a few game elements, yet it is not a game, it is absolutely reality. And the game elements are not even that apparent or obvious, to the point where you feel like it is a game. But there is a hint of romance, a lot of familial love, and a lot of happy moments together. This one is not a harem too, unlike EPTE. Oh, and once again, there is no lemons, unfortunately. I am just a beginner, and I actually do not know how to write out vivid scenes of lovemaking... for now. But there is ecchi, and a hint of spicy love. So be prepared. And either than that, please enjoy the ride. Will begin posting soon, about a week or two from now, two chapters a day. For now, I'll try a chapter every two days. Or two chapters every two days, if I am not writing a lot of tests at that time. Thanks~ Lastly, for real this time. I've also joined the Fantasy Festival Competition, hence I would appreciate the Votes And 10 Votes equals 1 extra Chapter, 20 Votes, two extra Chapters, so on and so forth. Love yall, stay safe~

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