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Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392Author1yrYinghuo_392

Author here, Wrote this since I am a huge fan of battlemance novels or Battle Romance This book has equal parts battle and romance. Since I can't say arem less it gets censored. I'll omit the h. This arem will get huge, but the Mcs wives will forever remain at 3. Everyone in this story will have a arem or will be part of a arem. And large scale battles for the arems will be the norm. But a large portion will also focus on the main cast the mc and his three wives. This book is chuuni so cringe with me as we self insert. This book is written by Me, so characters with actual development is necessary. This book already has a set end so it won't go on forever. I write with the end in mind so the plot should be tight and without plot holes. I hope you guys enjoy the initial 30 chapter release. I plan to release 1 chapter a day afterwards. I have ps targets so hit them if you want more. Should I get contracted I will add GT targets as well. Stay awesome and enjoy the read. Here is a picture of my writing buddies.

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Battle Harem of the Heavenly Sword

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Eram_Hossain_5461
Eram_Hossain_5461Lv4Eram_Hossain_5461

Bruh alot happened here lol

shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1shashank_panthri

what do you mean arem will be huge but wives will remain 3?

Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

Exactly that. The Mc will have no other lover beyond 3, but his battle harem will grow into hundreds of thousands. I can't share more than that as it would be spoiling, if you wish to know more then spoil youself by reading my explanations of the mechanics of the battle harem system in the auxiliary chapter. While it only covers about half of the full explanation, it will give you a good idea of what to expect. Happy reading and thank you for giving my novel a try.

shashank_panthri:what do you mean arem will be huge but wives will remain 3?
shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1shashank_panthri

So the members other than his wives, are they subordinates or does the protagonist actually have a physical or romantic relation with them?

Yinghuo_392:Exactly that. The Mc will have no other lover beyond 3, but his battle harem will grow into hundreds of thousands. I can't share more than that as it would be spoiling, if you wish to know more then spoil youself by reading my explanations of the mechanics of the battle harem system in the auxiliary chapter. While it only covers about half of the full explanation, it will give you a good idea of what to expect. Happy reading and thank you for giving my novel a try.
Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

He will only have sexual and romantic relations with his three wives, for everything else please check the battle harem system explanations in the auxiliary chapters.

shashank_panthri:So the members other than his wives, are they subordinates or does the protagonist actually have a physical or romantic relation with them?
shashank_panthri
shashank_panthriLv1shashank_panthri

okay, thanks

Yinghuo_392:He will only have sexual and romantic relations with his three wives, for everything else please check the battle harem system explanations in the auxiliary chapters.
GodOfYandere
GodOfYandereLv3GodOfYandere

Most important question, will all wives yandere? ?

Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

We have an assortment of Tsundere, Kuudere and a Yandere. But the novel has alot of them.

GodOfYandere:Most important question, will all wives yandere? ?
Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

Battle Harems version of Netorare only. Not the Japanese ones.

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Celestial_Zero24
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Means Mc In Netorare????

Yinghuo_392:Battle Harems version of Netorare only. Not the Japanese ones.
Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

Im' not sure if you read the explanation in the Auxiliary volume but the MC's people and his wives will be the ones doing the NTR. NTR at least the Battle harem version is a necessity to both save people and grow in strength. so there will be a lot of NTR in this novel (Battle Harem NTR).

Celestial_Zero24:Means Mc In Netorare????
Ayce_o_Spade
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Ok buddy. It seems like you may have a few screws loose because people ask you simple questions yet you answer with your own made up logic. Do the MC’s three wives have seggs with other men or women?

Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

ah my bad I misread your question. The answer is No. they only mate with the mc.

Ayce_o_Spade:Ok buddy. It seems like you may have a few screws loose because people ask you simple questions yet you answer with your own made up logic. Do the MC’s three wives have seggs with other men or women?
Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15Ayce_o_Spade

I was actually kinda rude and I apologize. But thanks for the straightforward answer.

Yinghuo_392:ah my bad I misread your question. The answer is No. they only mate with the mc.
Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15Ayce_o_Spade

When you read this comment section it seems like his three wives are out there sleeping with hundreds of men or women.

Yinghuo_392:ah my bad I misread your question. The answer is No. they only mate with the mc.
Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

No harm done Savior, thank you for taking a look at my book. The reason I cannot answer other questions in a sttaight forward manner is concerned with my books lore. The Battle Harem System in the book is tied to the plotline. thus the reader discovers its purpose with the MC. I feel breaking that is bad for those who read the thing. Anyway if you do decided to read it Enjoy. if you do not I wish for you to find a book that makes you happy in WN, even if that book isnt mine.

Ayce_o_Spade:I was actually kinda rude and I apologize. But thanks for the straightforward answer.
Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

That is due to the words harem. WN defines harems as groups of lover the owner has segs with. In reality and in history that is not the case. But i do not blame the readers for it is my fauly for using a harem as a narrative. Still I do hope that the ones that do give the book a try. enjoy at least.

Ayce_o_Spade:When you read this comment section it seems like his three wives are out there sleeping with hundreds of men or women.
Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15Ayce_o_Spade

I think I will check it out. The confusing answers just made me hesitant. One more question. Is there yuri within the harem in this?

Yinghuo_392:No harm done Savior, thank you for taking a look at my book. The reason I cannot answer other questions in a sttaight forward manner is concerned with my books lore. The Battle Harem System in the book is tied to the plotline. thus the reader discovers its purpose with the MC. I feel breaking that is bad for those who read the thing. Anyway if you do decided to read it Enjoy. if you do not I wish for you to find a book that makes you happy in WN, even if that book isnt mine.
Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

There is, as evryone in this novel either owns a harem or is part of a harem. There are both gay and yuri characters. but the MCs harem and his entire faction will remain straight.

Ayce_o_Spade:I think I will check it out. The confusing answers just made me hesitant. One more question. Is there yuri within the harem in this?
Ayce_o_Spade
Ayce_o_SpadeLv15Ayce_o_Spade

I guess I meant “within the inner harem”lol. As long as his wives are straight and only interact seggsually with MC and not eachother, then this gets a green light for me. [img=recommend]

Yinghuo_392:There is, as evryone in this novel either owns a harem or is part of a harem. There are both gay and yuri characters. but the MCs harem and his entire faction will remain straight.
Yinghuo_392
Yinghuo_392AuthorYinghuo_392

Interesting, so orgies with multiple women are a no go? thats like half the benefit of having a harem. lol

Ayce_o_Spade:I guess I meant “within the inner harem”lol. As long as his wives are straight and only interact seggsually with MC and not eachother, then this gets a green light for me. [img=recommend]