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2023-03-10 00:55

Review after the first chapter: Amazing! Absolutely amazing. When I write reviews I try my best to point out any flaws but there were nearly none! Good things: pretty much everything was near perfect, but a little more character development in terms of the mc would be helpful. still, I get what the author was trying to go for here, so no points take off for that. bad things: Sometimes a person talks a little too much, and the paragraph is quite long to read, although this is a fault, it is not a major one at all. overall very good. nicely done!

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