Review Detail of AstarosX in I Reincarnated as a Giant

This is obviously a novel from a newbie author so don't expect too much immediately. I like the concept and the powers and its a nice relaxation novel to read when you're tired of heavy stories. What I think could be better though is the writing. Punctuation and grammar need to be fixed. For example the usage of your or you're. Your means when you mean something is another persons(normally). "This is your book". The other one means "you are". "You're big" is an example of correct usage. I personally recommend using grammarly for it has helped me improve my writing. There's also many time-skips. Not that I'm against them but I think there's too many of them. Also, I wonder why the training arc is so prolonged. I thought all the people there are Npc's and it is a little unnecessary to introduce them so thoroughly. But well, it's your(notice how I used "your") story so you get to choose it.Lastly, I want to wish the author luck and many inspirations for his stories. Best regardsAstaros