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HSG_1999
HSG_1999Lv142yr
2022-11-15 05:41

The characters aren’t as well defined as one would like, seems to me like a Chinese translation. Grammar is decent. I feel that it could be paced better making it more relaxed and fleshing out the characters. But it’s readable, it has that going for it.

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jeffmiste
jeffmisteLv4

It is a translation, it says so in the synopsis.

HSG_1999
HSG_1999Lv14

So I was right. Thanks.

jeffmiste:It is a translation, it says so in the synopsis.
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