Review Detail of Neco_Arcussy in First Demonic Dragon
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TLDR: solid story, interesting take on the relationship between gods (author clearly knows a lot about that stuff), A little glossy on the details about powers, but makes up for it with decent character development, overall funny without beating dead horses too much. feels a little rushed in story development at points but I can see it being fine if it takes the route I believe it will. i wish the author would update a wee bit more but as long as the posting stays consistent it's no big deal.
First Demonic Dragon
AnathaShesha
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Thank you for the honest review! I appreciate the kind words and I will do my best to improve upon the points that you have mentioned. š But regarding the update schedule I wish I could post more but my real life is kind of hectic as I have a day job, a baby, a girlfriend to keep happy, and a whole other book to write. If I rush to just put out chapters, they would be shorter and I feel like the quality would suffer as well.
haven't read the story yet but willing to give it a try... if I may ask just from your profile name... do you happen to have gained inspiration from Korean novel&manhwa "Second Life Ranker"... I remember Anantha was Yeon's brother's wife or sth like that?š¤ Btw I am big fan of Second life Ranker especially it's mythological part
AnathaShesha:Thank you for the honest review! I appreciate the kind words and I will do my best to improve upon the points that you have mentioned. š But regarding the update schedule I wish I could post more but my real life is kind of hectic as I have a day job, a baby, a girlfriend to keep happy, and a whole other book to write. If I rush to just put out chapters, they would be shorter and I feel like the quality would suffer as well.
author plz write more words in a single chapter ts too short...it's like a yummy meal you are enjoying but before you are satisfied it's already over!!
AnathaShesha:Thank you for the honest review! I appreciate the kind words and I will do my best to improve upon the points that you have mentioned. š But regarding the update schedule I wish I could post more but my real life is kind of hectic as I have a day job, a baby, a girlfriend to keep happy, and a whole other book to write. If I rush to just put out chapters, they would be shorter and I feel like the quality would suffer as well.
How far are you?? Cause I think around chapter two hundred or so none of my chapters are less than 1800 words
Eternal_Shu:author plz write more words in a single chapter ts too short...it's like a yummy meal you are enjoying but before you are satisfied it's already over!!image
AnathaShesha:How far are you?? Cause I think around chapter two hundred or so none of my chapters are less than 1800 words
AnathaShesha:How far are you?? Cause I think around chapter two hundred or so none of my chapters are less than 1800 words
Itās supposed to be eight yea BUT imma pushover so if the readers tell me that thereās another girl that they want in the harem then Iāll hold like polls and stuff before I change anything
Eternal_Shu:btw does his harem increase more than 8 or is it the limit for this novel??
AnathaShesha:Itās supposed to be eight yea BUT imma pushover so if the readers tell me that thereās another girl that they want in the harem then Iāll hold like polls and stuff before I change anything
