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Review Detail of DeadSoil in First Demonic Dragon

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Positive points: Fast progress The protagonist quickly adapts to the situation and it doesn't take hundreds of chapters. The R-18 scenes are good and not too detailed or boring. Negative points: Although there is a time skip, I can't help but feel that everything still seems too childish and it would require hundreds or thousands of years of time skip. It doesn't make sense for the protagonist to be the sin of lust and only have a few wives and not have sex with anyone else, especially since the wives can decide with whom he has sex. This is just a beta protagonist from Japan. Personally, I don't like childishness, and adding a child who only throws tantrums and doesn't show any gratitude or courtesy towards the protagonist is unnecessary. The reality of the child and her mother before the protagonist was one of 100% humiliation and death, and yet I have to read about a retarded child who doesn't feel gratitude or respect for anything and throws tantrums when she doesn't get what she wants.

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